more minor review comments from Graeme Hewson

svn path=/trunk/; revision=11599

2 files changed, 19 insertions, 19 deletions

diff --git a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_introduction.xml b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_introduction.xml
index a740e2e5c3..72d4472039 100644
--- a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_introduction.xml
+++ b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_introduction.xml
@@ -519,7 +519,7 @@ $
 	    <note>

 	      <para>

 		backtrace is a <command>gdb</command> command. You should 

-		enter it verbatim after the first line shown above, it will not be 

+		enter it verbatim after the first line shown above, but it will not be 

 		echoed. The ^D 

 		(Control-D, that is, press the Control key and the D key 

 		together) will cause <command>gdb</command> to exit. This will 

diff --git a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_use.xml b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_use.xml
index 976076a1e0..ec85217f45 100644
--- a/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_use.xml
+++ b/docbook/ug-src/EUG_chapter_use.xml
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
 	    <para>

 	      This menu contains tems to open and merge capture files, 

 		  save / print / export capture files in whole or in part, 

-		  and to quit from Ethereal, see <xref linkend="ChUseFileMenuSection"/>.

+		  and to quit from Ethereal. See <xref linkend="ChUseFileMenuSection"/>.

 	    </para>

 	  </listitem>

 	</varlistentry>

@@ -162,8 +162,8 @@
 	    <para>

 	      This menu contains items to find a packet, time reference or mark one 

 		  or more packets, set your preferences, 

-	      (cut, copy, and paste are not presently implemented),

-		  see <xref linkend="ChUseEditMenuSection"/>.

+	      (cut, copy, and paste are not presently implemented).

+		  See <xref linkend="ChUseEditMenuSection"/>.

 	    </para>

 	  </listitem>

 	</varlistentry>

@@ -171,22 +171,22 @@
 	  <listitem>

 	    <para>This menu controls the display of the captured data, 

 		including the colorization of packets, zooming the font, 

-		show a packet in a separate window, expand and collapse trees in packet details, ...,

-		see <xref linkend="ChUseViewMenuSection"/>.

+		show a packet in a separate window, expand and collapse trees in packet details, ....

+		See <xref linkend="ChUseViewMenuSection"/>.

 		</para>

 	  </listitem>

 	</varlistentry>

 	<varlistentry><term><command>Go</command></term>

 	  <listitem>

-	    <para>This menu contains items to go to a specific packet,

-		see <xref linkend="ChUseGoMenuSection"/>.

+	    <para>This menu contains items to go to a specific packet.

+		See <xref linkend="ChUseGoMenuSection"/>.

 		</para>

 	  </listitem>

 	</varlistentry>

 	<varlistentry><term><command>Capture</command></term>

 	  <listitem>

-	    <para>This menu allows you to start and stop captures and to edit capture filters,

-		see <xref linkend="ChUseCaptureMenuSection"/>.

+	    <para>This menu allows you to start and stop captures and to edit capture filters.

+		See <xref linkend="ChUseCaptureMenuSection"/>.

 		</para>

 	  </listitem>

 	</varlistentry>

@@ -195,8 +195,8 @@
 	    <para>

 		  This menu contains items to manipulate display filters, enable or 

 		  disable the dissection of protocols, configure user specified decodes

-		  and follow a TCP stream,

-		  see <xref linkend="ChUseAnalyzeMenuSection"/>.

+		  and follow a TCP stream.

+		  See <xref linkend="ChUseAnalyzeMenuSection"/>.

 	    </para>

 	  </listitem>

 	</varlistentry>

@@ -205,8 +205,8 @@
 	    <para>

 	      This menu contains menu-items to display various statistic windows,

 		  including a summary of the packets that have been captured, 

-		  display protocol hierarchy statistics and much more,

-		  see <xref linkend="ChUseStatisticsMenuSection"/>.

+		  display protocol hierarchy statistics and much more.

+		  See <xref linkend="ChUseStatisticsMenuSection"/>.

 	    </para>

 	  </listitem>

 	</varlistentry>

@@ -215,8 +215,8 @@
 	    <para>

 	      This menu contains items to help the user, like access to some basic 

 		  help, a list of the supported protocols, manual pages, online access

-		  to some of the webpages, and the usual about dialog,

-		  see <xref linkend="ChUseHelpMenuSection"/>.

+		  to some of the webpages, and the usual about dialog.

+		  See <xref linkend="ChUseHelpMenuSection"/>.

 	    </para>

 	  </listitem>

 	  </varlistentry>

@@ -1637,9 +1637,9 @@
     </para>

     <para>	

 	For example, let's look at a packet containing TCP inside IP inside

-	an Ethernet packet. The Ethernet dissector will write its data (like the 

-	Ethernet addresses), the IP dissector will overwrite this by its own 

-	(like the IP addresses), the TCP dissector will overwrite the IP 

+	an Ethernet packet. The Ethernet dissector will write its data (such as 

+	the Ethernet addresses), the IP dissector will overwrite this by its own 

+	(such as the IP addresses), the TCP dissector will overwrite the IP 

 	information, and so on.

     </para>

     <para>