From eef6c0bd3230d76e35fba8add7cbec51ac23d57c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Denis 'GNUtoo' Carikli <GNUtoo@cyberdimension.org>
Date: Sun, 2 Feb 2020 14:06:24 +0100
Subject: Add fixes from peer-review

Signed-off-by: Denis 'GNUtoo' Carikli <GNUtoo@cyberdimension.org>
---
 .../Replicant_sustainability.tex                   | 30 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex b/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex
index ffa01bf..427c3ca 100644
--- a/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex
+++ b/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
   \center{Minimum feature set required to support a device:}
   \begin{itemize}
   \item Display working and graphics fast enough
-  \item sound working
+  \item Sound working
   \item Be able to make calls
   \item etc
   \item GPS, Camera, and other non crucial hardware may not work, or work in later releases
@@ -93,15 +93,15 @@
     \item GUI and applications adapted to big fingers
     \item $\rightarrow$ run on devices that:
       \begin{itemize}
-      \item lack keyboard
-      \item have capacitve touchscreen and no stylus
+      \item Lack keyboard
+      \item Have capacitve touchscreen and no stylus
       \item Have very small displays with very high number of pixel
       \end{itemize}
     \end{itemize}
   \item Issues
     \begin{itemize}
-    \item Part of the GNU/Linux software architecture is light years away: Package management and build system, Graphics, audio, etc
-    \item Huge unknown code from google
+    \item Part of the GNU/Linux software architecture is light years away: package management and build system, graphics, audio, etc
+    \item Huge unknown code from Google
     \item Meant to run proprietary software, not to empower users
     \end{itemize}
   \end{itemize}
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
     \begin{itemize}
     \item It can take time (years) to bring in a new framework in Linux
     \item Example of API breakage: HTC dream audio driver
-    \item Solution: Apps$\leftarrow$ $\rightarrow$ Android framework $\leftarrow$ $\rightarrow$ HAL $\leftarrow$ $\rightarrow$  Kernel
+    \item Solution: Apps $\leftrightarrow$ Android framework $\leftrightarrow$ HAL $\leftrightarrow$ Kernel
     \item Getting better in Android: Trebble and Generic Kernel images
     \end{itemize}
   \end{itemize}
@@ -803,7 +803,7 @@
   \usebeamercolor*{normal text}
   \begin{frame}
     \center {
-      So they abstract the kenrel in libraries that are often nonfree.
+      So they abstract the kernel in libraries that are often nonfree.
     }
   \end{frame}
 }
@@ -946,7 +946,7 @@
   \usebeamercolor*{normal text}
   \begin{frame}
     \center {
-      Revolutions, assasinations, armed conflicts, theft, strikes, teaching, living in remote communities, and even making a bank.
+      Revolutions, assasinations, armed conflicts, theft, strikes, teaching, living in remote communities, regicides, and even making a bank.
     }
   \end{frame}
 }
@@ -956,7 +956,7 @@
   \usebeamercolor*{normal text}
   \begin{frame}
     \center {
-      But beside remote communities and self-management spaces within the system, we didn't get get rid of abuse of power yet.
+      But besides remote communities and self-management spaces within the system, we didn't get rid of abuse of power yet.
     }
   \end{frame}
 }
@@ -976,7 +976,7 @@
   \usebeamercolor*{normal text}
   \begin{frame}
     \center {
-      I'm sorry dave, As of today smartphones can't respect your freedom.
+      I'm sorry Dave, as of today smartphones can't respect your freedom.
     }
   \end{frame}
 }
@@ -1016,7 +1016,7 @@
   \usebeamercolor*{normal text}
   \begin{frame}
     \center {
-      We have several fully free software GNU/Linux distrbutions and even Replicant, a fully free Android distribution.
+      We have several fully free software GNU/Linux distributions and even Replicant, a fully free Android distribution.
     }
   \end{frame}
 }
@@ -1036,7 +1036,7 @@
   \usebeamercolor*{normal text}
   \begin{frame}
     \center {
-      So if I've a supported device that has a removable battery, it will last longer with Replicant?
+      So if I've a supported device that has a removable battery, will it last longer with Replicant?
     }
   \end{frame}
 }
@@ -1146,7 +1146,7 @@
 %% }
 
 {
-  \setbeamercolor{normal text}{fg=blue}
+  \setbeamercolor{normal text}{fg=violet}
   \usebeamercolor*{normal text}
   \begin{frame}
     \center {
@@ -1157,11 +1157,11 @@
 }
 
 {
-  \setbeamercolor{normal text}{fg=blue}
+  \setbeamercolor{normal text}{fg=violet}
   \usebeamercolor*{normal text}
   \begin{frame}
     \center {
-      Other are meant to be repaired... \\
+      Others are meant to be repaired... \\
       But the software support is bad... \\
     }
   \end{frame}
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