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authorDenis 'GNUtoo' Carikli <GNUtoo@cyberdimension.org>2020-02-02 13:06:24 (GMT)
committerDenis 'GNUtoo' Carikli <GNUtoo@cyberdimension.org>2020-02-02 13:06:30 (GMT)
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Signed-off-by: Denis 'GNUtoo' Carikli <GNUtoo@cyberdimension.org>
-rw-r--r--36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex30
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diff --git a/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex b/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex
index ffa01bf..427c3ca 100644
--- a/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex
+++ b/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
\center{Minimum feature set required to support a device:}
\begin{itemize}
\item Display working and graphics fast enough
- \item sound working
+ \item Sound working
\item Be able to make calls
\item etc
\item GPS, Camera, and other non crucial hardware may not work, or work in later releases
@@ -93,15 +93,15 @@
\item GUI and applications adapted to big fingers
\item $\rightarrow$ run on devices that:
\begin{itemize}
- \item lack keyboard
- \item have capacitve touchscreen and no stylus
+ \item Lack keyboard
+ \item Have capacitve touchscreen and no stylus
\item Have very small displays with very high number of pixel
\end{itemize}
\end{itemize}
\item Issues
\begin{itemize}
- \item Part of the GNU/Linux software architecture is light years away: Package management and build system, Graphics, audio, etc
- \item Huge unknown code from google
+ \item Part of the GNU/Linux software architecture is light years away: package management and build system, graphics, audio, etc
+ \item Huge unknown code from Google
\item Meant to run proprietary software, not to empower users
\end{itemize}
\end{itemize}
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
\begin{itemize}
\item It can take time (years) to bring in a new framework in Linux
\item Example of API breakage: HTC dream audio driver
- \item Solution: Apps$\leftarrow$ $\rightarrow$ Android framework $\leftarrow$ $\rightarrow$ HAL $\leftarrow$ $\rightarrow$ Kernel
+ \item Solution: Apps $\leftrightarrow$ Android framework $\leftrightarrow$ HAL $\leftrightarrow$ Kernel
\item Getting better in Android: Trebble and Generic Kernel images
\end{itemize}
\end{itemize}
@@ -803,7 +803,7 @@
\usebeamercolor*{normal text}
\begin{frame}
\center {
- So they abstract the kenrel in libraries that are often nonfree.
+ So they abstract the kernel in libraries that are often nonfree.
}
\end{frame}
}
@@ -946,7 +946,7 @@
\usebeamercolor*{normal text}
\begin{frame}
\center {
- Revolutions, assasinations, armed conflicts, theft, strikes, teaching, living in remote communities, and even making a bank.
+ Revolutions, assasinations, armed conflicts, theft, strikes, teaching, living in remote communities, regicides, and even making a bank.
}
\end{frame}
}
@@ -956,7 +956,7 @@
\usebeamercolor*{normal text}
\begin{frame}
\center {
- But beside remote communities and self-management spaces within the system, we didn't get get rid of abuse of power yet.
+ But besides remote communities and self-management spaces within the system, we didn't get rid of abuse of power yet.
}
\end{frame}
}
@@ -976,7 +976,7 @@
\usebeamercolor*{normal text}
\begin{frame}
\center {
- I'm sorry dave, As of today smartphones can't respect your freedom.
+ I'm sorry Dave, as of today smartphones can't respect your freedom.
}
\end{frame}
}
@@ -1016,7 +1016,7 @@
\usebeamercolor*{normal text}
\begin{frame}
\center {
- We have several fully free software GNU/Linux distrbutions and even Replicant, a fully free Android distribution.
+ We have several fully free software GNU/Linux distributions and even Replicant, a fully free Android distribution.
}
\end{frame}
}
@@ -1036,7 +1036,7 @@
\usebeamercolor*{normal text}
\begin{frame}
\center {
- So if I've a supported device that has a removable battery, it will last longer with Replicant?
+ So if I've a supported device that has a removable battery, will it last longer with Replicant?
}
\end{frame}
}
@@ -1146,7 +1146,7 @@
%% }
{
- \setbeamercolor{normal text}{fg=blue}
+ \setbeamercolor{normal text}{fg=violet}
\usebeamercolor*{normal text}
\begin{frame}
\center {
@@ -1157,11 +1157,11 @@
}
{
- \setbeamercolor{normal text}{fg=blue}
+ \setbeamercolor{normal text}{fg=violet}
\usebeamercolor*{normal text}
\begin{frame}
\center {
- Other are meant to be repaired... \\
+ Others are meant to be repaired... \\
But the software support is bad... \\
}
\end{frame}