From ec9a660d7262c3813a3fa84feb55e4f51d97b5bc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Denis 'GNUtoo' Carikli <GNUtoo@cyberdimension.org>
Date: Wed, 20 Nov 2019 18:54:47 +0100
Subject: Add suggestions

Signed-off-by: Denis 'GNUtoo' Carikli <GNUtoo@cyberdimension.org>
---
 36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex | 7 ++++---
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to '36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex')

diff --git a/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex b/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex
index 5a9fe3a..29de7eb 100644
--- a/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex
+++ b/36c3/Replicant_sustainability/Replicant_sustainability.tex
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
   \item SOCs, WiFi chips, smartphones and tablets
     \begin{itemize}
     \item Write the code that work as fast as possible
-    \item Support as much hardware features as possible
+    \item Support as many hardware features as possible
     \item $\rightarrow$ Varying code quality
     \item $\rightarrow$ Example: One driver rewritten 3 times %% TODO: reference
     \end{itemize}
@@ -152,7 +152,8 @@
 \end{frame}
 
 \begin{frame}
-  \center{Freedom and companies image:}
+  \center{Ugly code is good (for freedom):}
+  %% TODO: replace with [blobby from OpenBSD] VS [dirty tux] -> [freedo]
   \begin{itemize}
   \item Having the source code under free software licenses, even if the code quality is bad is crucial for freedom:
     \begin{itemize}
@@ -246,7 +247,7 @@
     \begin{itemize}
     \item $\rightarrow$ Very strong incentive to discontinue support for them
     \item $\rightarrow$ negligeable freedom gained by installing Replicant
-    \item $\rightarrow$ Replicant was still useful as support for better devices were added later
+    \item $\rightarrow$ Replicant was still useful as support when better devices were added later
     \end{itemize}
   \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
-- 
cgit v1.2.3

